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A Broken Shard by CrumbledWings A Broken Shard by CrumbledWings

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The cover image is a stock image from deposit-photos (did not feel like has to deal with art theft assaults). The name is kinda of trivial and cryptic but i wanted to include the two main analogies i made within the poem (originally two but i merged them). Hope everyone likes.
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reycie311 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D for whore AHAHAHAHAHA I get it.
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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful poetry :) I was sent over from Blue's recommendation :) Lovely work!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you and i'm glad i was recommended :D
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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Broken Glass

Broken glass pieces of sharpen shards
Cutting deeply reminding us of who we are
The glass are our shattered past
And our broken hopes and dreams
But they too have means
Painful lessons about life love and failure
Littering our lives path
We trail them after us and hope never to step
On another soul’s broken glass
But they do have beauty too
Drop them into the churning sea
Sit beside the sand and watch the magic began
Each wave pushing and pulling wearing each sharpen edge
Making a soft stone of glass a jewel of lessons lived
Soon they look like gems in our hands
Like a piece of rock candy covered in dust
From out of the pockets of grandmothers aprons
Sure life breaks us hearts minds and souls
But if we look out pass the storm clouds
Perhaps just then there will be a rainbow of broken colored glass



Your words are beautiful as a writers soul knows how to dance ink upon paper seas.............
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
.... i love it :heartbreaker: . That poem is absolutely beautiful. i truly think it out does it was meant to comment on. I especially love the theme. And thank you for the compliment :D
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are so very welcome Dance on Dancer of words :iconbowplz:
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theheek Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
awsome i love it
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
:iconlovesqueeplz: very nice! you can capture emotion so beautifully in such a simple way
but umm D for whore?
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
baw it was a screw up .
i had two lines d for dick
w for whore
But i thought the dick one was stupid so i cut it out but i must have messed up.
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
haha that's kind of funny ^^
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GoldenDrakAngel Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
reminds me of my fucked up life... D:
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shutupdork Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is a well written poem! I wish that I could still write like that!
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xyvette Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
wow o.o i love it o.o <3~
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akwildrose Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   General Artist
Wow. Deep.
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AlexandraKat Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
i love it--but i do have one question: why D for whore? I feel im missing something...
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
woops that might have been a typo but i'm glad u enjoyed the poem :D
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AlexandraKat Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
I certainly did :D
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LiaJensonArtExtra Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love love love love love love
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CandyHeartSweetness Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this!
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
WOW That was absolutely amazing! I love it!
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allawesome Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this poem.... I can relate
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FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gorgeous
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
i love the username and thank you i hope your willing to read more of my work in the future
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FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. And i will read more of your stuff.
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Fang-a-rang Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it! :D
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