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A Gift For A Princess by CrumbledWings A Gift For A Princess by CrumbledWings

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Alright i forgot who did the awesome cover image (could somebody find out)
Alright this is a co-op poem done with intracately-ordinary (awesome poet). All the princess parts were done by her hope you enjoy :D
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deideiblueeyez Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You might as well have ripped my heart out! Aaaangh... Saaadness...washing over me!!
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MrTravT Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
This poem is beautiful. It's so sad that the little girl dosn't fully understand what is happening.
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CeliHC Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
euuuhhh the feelsss.
It was so tragic, and-
the feelss. TT-TT
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Writer
oh
my
gods
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white335 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really sad...;___;
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
beautifully done and very sad. i wish it had had a more cheery ending then this. but quite well done
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plum-lagoon Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
its beautifull
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I can't see it; don't hav PDF
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
in the actual piece there are spaces between the changing points of view
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
What an ugly desk
A man thought disgusted
At what his life had become
This small little desk
That he barely fit within,
No pictures
How could he
He’s rarely seen his family.
He sits at his desk
Trying to remember
A truth he had forgotten
What his true job was
A princess’s knight.
A princess he loved dearly
A princess he needed to see.
So he left the life
Leaving behind only an ugly desk
Stopping only to get the gift
His princess deserved
And speeding to the life he wish he had
A little girl sat alone
Too sad for one so young
Writing a single birthday wish
Daddy,
I wrote you a song,
but you're never here to hear it.
I miss when you used to tuck me in bed,
and kiss my head,
and call me your little princess.
Mommy said your eyes are blue,
but I guess I forgot what they look like.
She said that's why mine are, too
and she says that I'm a lot like you-
I wish you were here to see it.
Won't you come home soon?
Love, Your Little Princess
He raced with time
A gift so small in his lap
Knowing it would fit perfectly in her fragile hands
And her eyes would shine
As she unwrapped this small perfection
He would finally see
Her beautiful smile break free
She would be his princess again
And together they would chase dragons,
But as he followed these dreams
He lost reality.
He never saw the green light turn red
Or the pair white lights
That crashed into his side
The only thing he saw
Was a gift so small
It would fit perfectly
In a princess’s hands.
Daddy,
I sang you your song
and mommy said you heard it
in heaven but all I saw was dirt
and cloudy skies and people in black
and stones that looked blue
like your eyes but I don’t remember.
Everyone was crying, and they told me
I was being strong, and they missed you.
But I told them you were coming home soon.
I wish you were here to see it.
Won’t you come home soon?
Love, Your Little Princess

That's the piece, hoped you liked it
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
thank you, that was beautiful
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Cocolena Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Writer
its an amazing poem. i write poems my self, but there never this amazing like yours! :p
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xXSpiritualArtistXx Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm crying... Oh, goodness, that's so sweet...
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RoseBell24 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
very nicely done
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shrewtamer Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly started to tear up! That was so awesome! :D
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Sorain26 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student General Artist
You've written such a deep poem, well done.
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TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg i cried for an hour this is just so sad!! :'(
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dragonfuture Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I cried when I read this.
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ZEB31 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow this is so deep I don't know how to explain.
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godzilla19 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student General Artist
its so sad!
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bzjvlfnmhz Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Pretty sure the art work was by glenz (some works can be found here), the poem reminds me of the position my wife is in loosing her father, epic movement emotionally well done.
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DropFromTheOcean Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
made me cry...
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Anto-Sullivan Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
:clap: Oh My... This is so beautiful!! Yet tragic... Is perfect, the love of a little child for her father, the non-understanding of a child in fron of a situation like that, the father that only wants to be with his little girl but is imprisoned in his office--- Just perfect. :worship:
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful. Truly moving. I teared up, actually. ;u;
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KingTheoz Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is one of the best poetry iv read in a long time :airborne:
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Matrixed007 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not going to lie, your poem really moved me to tears. I believe you truelly captured the innocents of the child and the struggles of a overly hard working father would have. This is a master Piece.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Wowo masterpiece . Truly thank you and i hope you like more of my works :D
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Jakit Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, that is so moving and so sad. Beautiful work.
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sparkpaw Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;_; NOOOOO. I don't like reading sadnessss. D:
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LilStomples Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:ohnoes: WHAAAA-
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Maridantas1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
*crying* Oh my God, this is so sad!! And so beautiful!
I really LOVE it!!! T_T
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RyouYamiBakura Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Wonderful. A piece of art on paper (or in this case, on the screen). Well done.
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Giggle-Leaf Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
awww...IT WONT LET ME SEE THE PICTURE!!!!!!!!! WAHHHHHH!!!! :crying:
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Makishu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student
Considering how close I am to my dad, this really makes me want to cry at the idea of losing him.
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anime-art-freak579 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Lovely poem. Very sweet and yet so sad.
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Electra1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This made me cry. The words are so well written.
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xfoxfirex Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought of my husband who's daughter lives with his ex in another city. I would if he feels like the dad in this poem. Too bad the courts think vagina= better parent. Poor kid is living with another of mommy's boyfriend's and his mom and his grandma and creepy brother. Ugh....
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diskfire Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
That was...beautiful. :happycry:
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AlucardsGhost Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
meh.
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ColorLovingOutcast Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't seem to access it, it's saying something about software -.-*
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Motackt Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Awww :(
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Anime-Angelz Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh gosh, I'm crying
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Twocool935 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Artist
Where's the poem?
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Uchihamonstermaker Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Sad ...T.T ... And it was probably a bad idea to listen to a sad song it made me tear up a little
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jayfeather20 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is the most beautiful and sweet and sad thing i have ever read!
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eclipsesong Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
I cried.....
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novascottch Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I actually almost cried. That was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
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Florrosada12 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't see it. :(
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bananasugar67 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It gave me goosebumps.. love the poem
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