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I want someone to talk to
it may not sound like much
but its all I want of you

I want to never be alone
to never be forced to hear
the silent creaks of my home

I want someone to share with me
to give me the pieces of their day
through tiny conversations, and hearty stories
till there's nothing left to say

I want someone to stay with me
on those many cold nights
when the only thing that can keep me warm
are their sweet whispered delights

I want someone
it hardly matters who
to stick with me
and stay with me through
the transgressions of my days
the weaknesses of my soul
and share the same with me
make me feel whole 

I want to someone to talk to
someone's whose hand I can clutch
All I want is a true friend
Surely that isn't too much
I've always been a sociable kids, i have tens of friends but i don't i have any ones as real and as true as the one I want.
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:iconautumn-fest:
Autumn-Fest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Made me cry a bit.......going though something right now..................like this.....
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CaramelPuffpuff Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
me: THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS!!!!!
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snapple120 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
I haven't been as touched or moved by anyone's modern day poetry as much as
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"I want to someone to talk to"
             ^  

Was that "to" a mistake?

Either way this was a great peace of work. 

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johnnyboy1020 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
awesome. 
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwwwwww my goodness... so sweet and sad and beautiful at the same time <3
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cutie1774 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
beautiful dude. now if you'd just tell me your name....
but honestly you're a great writer and i'm also glad you got me back on here.
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wiilol4u Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student General Artist
this is the best thing I've ever read! Great job.
I want a friend like that too...
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lovefemalesuicide Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
unfortunately true friends are very rare nowadays :(
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PonyCUMPie Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
WO WO WO WO!
you realize whatcha asking for? thats kinda too much, you gotta desirve that jeezus christ!!!!
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:iconhorneydog:
horneydog Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
im here for you,love ya
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well always want the same, I am have the same situation  
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Jamesly13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
</3 I can relate
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Writer
Well, that certainly bowled me over with how heavy it was. It was good though. Very good.
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Sexup6969 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Artist
sup
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:iconsjeitan:
Sjeitan Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Filmographer
So demanding of you.
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XxcandyxX16 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem and the way it rhymes xD
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schnarre Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
...Like the flow of the rhyme as it proceeds!  Nicely done! :)
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jachamberlin Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014

I just finished reading all the comments. I post my comment on the work but I also wanted to say, anything worthwhile in life takes work. Friendship is no exception. I find myself working incredibly hard to keep in touch & spend time with friends.

Keep in mind that no social media replaces the joy and feeling of being with those that make you happy.

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praetorianrick Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really do want the my friend very wonderful poem indeed
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jachamberlin Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Though it may seem simple what you ask is all of someone. This is not a light request. That being said when you find someone to give you all of themselves, don't squander or neglect them. There are few people in your life that will be truly a friend, and believe me they are worth their weight in gold.

I truly wish you the best of luck in your quest.
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Faith-Maria-Maurer Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student General Artist
I think you just described all my feelings in one well written poem, (Thank you...because at least I know now, that I'm not alone :) )
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TatsukiOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Very beautiful and powerful poem, I love it<3
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Beltaneh Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
It is a beautiful poem, and many of us can sure relate to this feeling :)
The only thing I would discuss is if that "who" is something unimportant. Anyway, just an opinion
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
I wondered, too. Then I realized, if I had someone like this, a lot of things about this person would not matter. We might never be able to ride in a car with the radio on because we hated each others' favorite music. It could be much more serious, like drastically different political viewpoints. This might not me our idea of a perfect person, but that doesn't mean this isn't a perfect friend. That's my interpretation, that it doesn't matter who love comes from as long as the love is good. What do you think?
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Beltaneh Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
oh, yes. In this sense who does not matter at all. At the end of the day this things are rather small if you can trust somebody. Definetly this deepest thing (connection or whatever) is the most important. I guess friendships do not last without it - in my case at last
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I'm still searching for that special thing, too, so don't worry about being alone. We're all alone together until we find our matches, and there's so much potential for each of us. Who knows whom we'll meet? You'll find your true, lasting friendship, and so will I. Maybe you feel me insufferably optimistic, but I just know it's true.
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Beltaneh Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Au contraire :) It is very nice to hear this
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theskymew Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm lucky to have a very close friend, but she isn't as close as she could be... Since my group is very big we don't get to talk loads but that sort of friend would probably be a partner. A girlfriend or boyfriend.
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daydreamhigh Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the way that you wrote those feelings is brilliant and a beautiful impersonal sadness
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Aveneline Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The story of my life right here :(
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a really good poem.. I can relate :c
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loonymoon101 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
thats how i felt for the longest, it was really kind of you to share this
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:icondeathwatch116:
Deathwatch116 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Now that hits hard. I used to be like that but now I have two awesome people I can call brothers and one of them felt like this too.
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Neishany Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pikachu Crying Plz 
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WastelandNostalgia Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh the feels ~~
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tomboysquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww I really feel like this sometimes :(
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HelsinkiAngels Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
If you try sometime, you just might find you get what you need ;)
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GemDeDude Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Good luck! :) It really is amazing to have that special person. :love: I am physically cold when I have to sleep without my husband next to me, even if only for one hour. :lol:
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srg1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful. It states the wish of our hearts.
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R3dFangz Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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CatBastet70 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
<3
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice. ^_^
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LittleFreddie123 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist
♥♥♥
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zacubo23 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student General Artist
i know your feel
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AuraRaPhen Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Great piece.
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bishop2z3z Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Wonderful and touching
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LingTina Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful words! I loved it. It reaches into the true depths of loneliness.
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LugiaUmbreonPower Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student General Artist
um...dunno if its a mistake or not but 'I want 'to' someone to talk to' *I want someone to talk to* (just reminding)
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emtyempathy Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Wow, this is like a work of a true poet . I just love it. You are the greatest .I believe better than this -Oldren- person too.
Bravo, my child.
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