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Baby Don't Cry by CrumbledWings Baby Don't Cry by CrumbledWings

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I DID NOT MAKE THE PHOTO. If you want to fav the photo got to ~photoImpact . I decided to make my first poem of 2013 a lullaby with my own cruel twist. Hope everyone enjoys:D
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Lilithmae1231 Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure saying I liked it is really appropriate given the context. But I loved the writing even if the words themselves brought tears to my eyes.
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:iconangrboda555:
this is so sad! it left me with a weird feeling... but I really like it ^^
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:iconcrumbledwings:
Glad you liked it, it was a bit of a dud but i was proud of it :D
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:iconangrboda555:
you should be proud it's really very good ^^
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:iconmacaroniman3:
That's... woah. Just woah.
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draigthedm Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that is so sad. well written but sad
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:iconitshappybunny1234:
[Touching. It sounds like someone's father has been abusive. :(]
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LuthienneTinuvielle Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow
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:iconvyktiir:
That was amazing. Sad and tragic but amazing.
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tommerch Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very, very haunting.

Thos. Merchant
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