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I DID NOT MAKE THE PHOTO. If you want to fav the photo got to ~photoImpact . I decided to make my first poem of 2013 a lullaby with my own cruel twist. Hope everyone enjoys:D
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure saying I liked it is really appropriate given the context. But I loved the writing even if the words themselves brought tears to my eyes.
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
this is so sad! it left me with a weird feeling... but I really like it ^^
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Glad you liked it, it was a bit of a dud but i was proud of it :D
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
you should be proud it's really very good ^^
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macaroniman3 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
That's... woah. Just woah.
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draigthedm Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that is so sad. well written but sad
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itshappybunny1234 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
[Touching. It sounds like someone's father has been abusive. :(]
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LuthienneTinuvielle Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow
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Vyktiir Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
That was amazing. Sad and tragic but amazing.
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tommerch Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very, very haunting.

Thos. Merchant
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(sniff!)
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TeamShikaIno Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist
That is so sad but very beautiful~
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LupusIntus Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very sad, but I love it!

Feeeeeeeeeelingsssssssssssssssssssss :heart: :la: :heart:
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Awesome :D :iconattackglompplz:
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh this is so sad. But it's amazing.
I literally had to stop and really think about what I read.
So I read it over and over again.
My breath was taken from me for a while.
This is amazing.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Wow i'm glad you enjoyed the poem and i hope you'll be willing to read more of my works in the future :D
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure! Maybe you read my poem "Better Left Unsaid"?
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Sure :D
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I was asking if you had XD
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
oops well no i have not but i'm sure i'll enjoy it
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh haha.
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