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Everyday 
I try 
to crumble up
the remnant pieces 
of my love for you
and throw them in the trash
but I'm such a bad shot.
STILL NEED SUPPORT ON WATTPAD HERE:www.wattpad.com/user/CrumbledW…

Pretty simple hope everyone enjoys XD. I was too lazy to make a whole poem out of this concept . Just a quick thought

EDIT: 
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLSY SHIT
I GOT A DD. ON MY LEAST FAVORITE PIECE
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Bad Shot by CrumbledWings shows that it doesn't take many words to create a strong emotion in both the written work and reflect that emotion to the reader. ( Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Sssorry Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Boy, I sure wish I had written that! Perfect. Nice work. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations on the DD.

White light,
Sorry
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   General Artist
Congratulations. Wonderful piece.
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AgonizingSwordfish Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Congratulations on the DD! :happybounce:
Great piece :)
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Liettore Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Look, sweetie, bashing someone's art is bad enough. Advertising right underneath is even worse. Please stop it.
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Artist-Chi Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How is this DD material?
Well dearie, you must be new to the art world.
Art: the various branches of creative activity, such as painting, music, literature, and dance.

This is very much art, it doesn't have to be visual. It may not be long, but its creative and it speaks to people. I find it VERY DD worthy, and a piece of literature gets a DD about everyday.
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LaughButts Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"ON MY LEAST FAVORITE PIECE"

HAHAH, HAPPENS ALL THE TIME
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AngelParagon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's not easy letting go of the past..
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Lady-Weavile-461 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LAZY!? But it's so good!! :O
(congrats on the DD too XD :iconhandsomeonionplz: )
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meiyue Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Congratulations on the DD! :love: 

Have a nice day :iconlainloveplz:
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student General Artist
This... Wow. It's perfect. Congrats on the DD, too. XD I always find the pieces I hate the most are liked the most.
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations on the well deserved DD!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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BeautifulAdmiration Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem, simple yet deep, and easy to relate to.
Worst feeling ever! 
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jamyjamj Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
As someone that just ended a year long relationship, I can definitely relate to this.
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HonestArtii Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
:o (Eek) 
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Angiebeagoodgirl Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is...perfect
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mrhungry56 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
You don't really need any more words than what you have here. It's simply excellent as it is!
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fashionrise Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
aaaaawwww..........well said
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Gamer5444 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well done.
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wordmeister Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
try movin' the bloody thing closer mate
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delphifilm Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014   Filmographer
negative tunnel vision or what?
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luckynr1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Well done!
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