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Everyday 
I try 
to crumble up
the remnant pieces 
of my love for you
and throw them in the trash
but I'm such a bad shot.
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Pretty simple hope everyone enjoys XD. I was too lazy to make a whole poem out of this concept . Just a quick thought

EDIT: 
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLSY SHIT
I GOT A DD. ON MY LEAST FAVORITE PIECE
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Bad Shot by CrumbledWings shows that it doesn't take many words to create a strong emotion in both the written work and reflect that emotion to the reader. ( Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Sssorry Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Boy, I sure wish I had written that! Perfect. Nice work. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations on the DD.

White light,
Sorry
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   General Artist
Congratulations. Wonderful piece.
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AgonizingSwordfish Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Congratulations on the DD! :happybounce:
Great piece :)
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TeamLeoOmega Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Look, sweetie, bashing someone's art is bad enough. Advertising right underneath is even worse. Please stop it.
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Artist-Chi Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How is this DD material?
Well dearie, you must be new to the art world.
Art: the various branches of creative activity, such as painting, music, literature, and dance.

This is very much art, it doesn't have to be visual. It may not be long, but its creative and it speaks to people. I find it VERY DD worthy, and a piece of literature gets a DD about everyday.
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LaughButts Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"ON MY LEAST FAVORITE PIECE"

HAHAH, HAPPENS ALL THE TIME
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AngelParagon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's not easy letting go of the past..
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