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Can I send you the stars?
A million twinkling lettters
Waiting above your head each night to be read
In gentle melody like  midnight lullabies
For the girl  I dearly wish could hear them.
Can I borrow your moon?
I know without  it your nights may feel empty
But I envy  its lovely radiance shining
Upon those two eyes
I wish I could see wish I could gaze into
So instead could I borrow your Moon?
And gaze into it hoping I'll find the loveliness
Of your eyes there instead.
Could I steal your  Sun?
And pocket  it's millions
And millions of memories
Of lightly caressing you with its rays
Knowing the feel of every beautifully delicate
Part of you for every day of every year..
Could I lease your dreams?
And reside there with you
Underneath our stars' gentle lullabies
And beneath the Moon's loving gaze
Away from the Sun's prying rays
With you...
Since you're all I really need.
So could I send you the stars
And hope they'll send my love too?
Sorry if you seen this before I had to take it down to make sure i wasn't disqualified from a contest. If you've seen it please favorite again :D hope everyone enjoys
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014   General Artist
:wave: Hello,
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We have posted your work on our front page and in our featured folder!
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TheLibertasLeague Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"A million twinkling lettters" -- letters?
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Oralle08 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is such a sweet poem! Beautifully written! :D
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supercarma Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student General Artist
this is great!Clap 
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That1PersonUForgot Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love it! great job :)
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   General Artist
:wave: Hello, I used this deviation to write this piece :love: Have an awesome day =D
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xXMizuNoOokamiXx Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is so sweet :D I think this could be a wonderfull song to sing it's so touching and sweet :heart:
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PurpleRayRomeo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this it's so beautiful! :') <3
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