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Crumbled Wings by CrumbledWings Crumbled Wings by CrumbledWings

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The beautiful cover pick was done by :iconnajato:~Najato This piece was originally supposed to be "Paper Plane Hearts" but I decided to combine the theme with my new username. Bit long but not as long as my other new piece. Hope everyone enjoys.
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Critique by MissStory Sep 2, 2013, 9:27:53 PM
I was very entranced in this poem, as I've gotten something from it, even if it's not the same as someone else got from it. What I like about this poem is how it talks about how we fly above our problems and hope that we can forget them. We make wings through the good in our lives and use it to try to fly from our problems. But the thing is, we are avoiding something we often refuse to do-refine ourselves. That means letting go of some of the human instincts such as hitting someone when they've hit you. Like trees, when they rot, they are polished. They can last thousands of years through the hardening and improvements of their bark. We need the trials we need the problems because they can help us become stronger.
What I got out of this poem is that we depend so much on the "I love you"s and other people helping us, when sometimes we can only help ourselves...or relying on God to take us the rest of they way there when one has done all that they could do by themselves. So, in other words, I have to disagree that crumbled wings are the best way to go, but I've been there and in a sense still there. Your poem was profound-I really, really enjoyed reading it. I could picture myself flying over a city, the city of my problems. Thank you so much for posting this on DA, it is quite a wonderful piece. Keep up the good work :D

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LetoIItheTyrant Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This ---> " It appears you don't have PDF support in this web browser. Download PDF " <--- below the pic is kinda spammish, as I do in fact have PDF in my browser - nice pic though...
LetMeBeMyself44 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Wow. I love the way this poem glides like the love it is about. It really is an amazing work. Far better than I will ever be able to do!
NutHun Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
the cover works so well with the it both
Najato Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this is really nicely done. I'm honored that you wanted to use my art for it!
CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
uh huh. Thanks for letting me use it and then the free publicity is nice huh :D
yvonnelouise Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
very nice!
krazykitten1001 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Jenna7777777 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is so pretty! <3
GirlHaxr Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is what I think happens when you bully someone. They used to be an angel and now they are depressed and they start to crumple.
Universul Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
After reading this, I was left with that "wow" feeling. Very good poem indeed, descriptive and accurate. Love it!
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