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Dying Without You by CrumbledWings Dying Without You by CrumbledWings

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The awesome cover image was done by =Pretty-Angel . Alright this was originally a bunch of random song lyrics is was writing that i decided to randomly combine and upload them since i gave up on the original song. Hope everyone likes :)
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
i like it! especially the beginning and the ending was different ^^
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Glad you like it
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
:aww: I love reading you poems
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Also about the poem i am currently about to finish. I would like your input about it. It s about a young man who is a passerby always looking at his dream for afar, and is happy in his wanting. Do u think people would like this topic?
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
yeah! that sounds awesome!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
:D happy you like the idea
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
it sounds so interesting I really want to read it! haha sorry I get very excited about these things :)
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
i'm glad your so excited it helps me be more dedicated towards my writing (i really got to get to on my book). i'm a tad bit lazy
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Well ain't i flattered. Thank you, and i'm glad you enjoy them. I plan to submit one later tonight if your still online.
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I'll have to read it ^^
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dynamiteboy8 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it very much!! Great piece :)
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Tayla19 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this poem is just so amazing it made me want to cry =') it was beautifully written and had a magnificent message of lost love i can relate to this poem very well and i think that is why it is such a great poem, because people can relate to it. keep up the good work =)
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Eggtastic Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Spam.
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NicolaiGrey Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
cover image was amazing and your poem was beauitiful i loved every line. amazing work
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Alex-Chibi Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a beautiful poem! I love the way it was put together, even if just a mix of things.(:
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Thank you. I hope your willing to look at more of my works :D
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Alex-Chibi Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally!!
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SweetFluffyCandy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
love the bubbles =)
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