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Each night
I lay in bed...
Letting my covers
Try to keep me warm
Though they're never
As warm as your arms.
Letting my dreams
Try to soothe me
Into a deathly calm
Though they're never
As calming as your
Quiet snores.
Letting hundreds of sheep
Try to caress my eyes
To finally close
Though they shall never
Comfort me
In the way your gentle hand
In mine will.
And while the covers may try
They will never fill the place
Where you slept beside me.
My dreams will never
Fill the emptiness left
Without your breathe.
The sheep will never
Lift me away
Like the comfort of knowing
That your near me
And that you
Will be the first thing I see
When I wake
Always has.
And each night I stay awake
Because without you
I'd rather not sleep.
3 minutes to write. Hope everyone enjoys :D
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ccfirebloom Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Three minutes? Are you magic?
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PutYourBraveFaceOn Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
"Like the comfort of knowing/That your near me" ... you should modify your into you're. ;)
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blasterchicken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
I like it
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SciFi-meets-Fantasy Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So much emotionsWaaaah!. This is a great piece.
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i like it so much~  c;
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StepOnMeAndYouDie Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really gooddOvOb Your a poet friend:D
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TresArtistic Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful poem!
Very well done!
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mysterious006 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
awwwwwwwwwww
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DoneWithLove Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice done;)
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