Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconcrumbledwings: More from CrumbledWings


Featured in Collections

read later by Fiiona-XueLi

Lit by aly1992


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
February 2
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
3,581
Favourites
352 (who?)
Comments
47

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
×
Hey remember me?
I'm lonely
Without anyone to talk to,
Yeah we met last week
I'm so glad
You actually remembered me.

Hey remember me?
I'm happy
That we could hang out.
I know it might
Seem a bit strange to ask
But are we friends?
Yeah?!
Thank goodness
Now I can be at ease
You’re really here with me
It wasn't just a tease.

Hey remember me?
I'm weird
Just a little bit though
I thought you liked me
Because of that
Because of the way I am
Right?

Hey remember me?
I'm trying
To keep up a smile
But it’s getting pretty hard
Because every once in awhile
It seems like all you want
Is for me to cry.
Is that what a friend does?

Hey remember me?
Please say you do
I'm your friend
And all that entails
So I can take them
All your continual assails
As long as you remember me
I doubt my heart will fail.

Hey remember me?
I'm being forgotten
Though I suppose that means you don't
You never do
Never even try to
Even after all I've begged of you
Even after all we've been through
You treat me like I'm nothing
Is that all I really am to you?

Hey remember me?
No?
You never really did
And while I prayed for friendship
And fought for your love
Asked to be remembered,
You never really remembered me,
And there's no need for you to know
I'm me and I always will be
Whether or not you remember me.
This was specifically  written for remembermeforawesome :iconremembermeforawesome: . Its another one of my free request pieces. If you liked it and want me to help to express some of your thoughts just leave a comment asking or note me .

The only thing I didnt like about it was the structure i ended up using , i wanted more flow and rhyming T.T alright hope everyone enjoys XD

UPDATE: wow it reached front page reallllllyyy wasn't expecting that
Add a Comment:
 
:iconlucarloroq:
lucarloroq Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
Loved it! One of these days i'll note you, i wanna see how you would express my feelings. xD

Btw, why don't you check my gallery?

Cheers
Reply
:iconautumn-fest:
Autumn-Fest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Friends beaten me up mentally....I feel like I have no sense of myself.....A friend broke my heart recently.....gonna send her this and maybe she'll understand that I am forgotten...but that is what everyone thinks already.......*siigghh*
Reply
:iconduskthedarkwolf:
DuskTheDarkwolf Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
This reminds me of someone I used to be friends with. Now it's like I never existed to him... :(
Reply
:iconmeadowstar01:
Meadowstar01 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
I just looked back on this, and I would like to say that you did a really good job on this poem! It's something I also feel that I can relate to as well. Nice job!
Reply
:iconmmorpgwizard:
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OH MY GOSH THAT BROKE MY HEART, YOU NEED A FRIEND?
OF COURSE I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND!
Reply
:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
reading this again made me almost cry.
Reply
:iconflightless-wingz:
Flightless-Wingz Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing, a sharp jab to the heart but so worth reading. It brings up pain I'm still trying to get over, but in a helpful way. You are truly talented
Reply
:iconthejulesrules:
TheJulesRules Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This hits home for me. :( Thank you.
Reply
:iconsorcorer:
Sorcorer Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
My heart dropped to the floor, but it was worth it. I love how with each stanza the other person seemed to forget about the speaker more and more.
Reply
:iconxxseas-of-emeraldxx:
xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...I can really relate to this. But I am at a loss for words, here. I think it flowed really nicely, and I like the rhyme scheme here. This is too amazing for words AHHHHHH :la:
Reply
Add a Comment: