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I Miss You by CrumbledWings I Miss You by CrumbledWings

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The awesome cover image was done by ~Erka-ruru . This piece both meant for a specific event and the anyone who's felt this way. The particular event i was thinking of was the Connecticut Shooting , and how unfair and unthinkable the events were. Instead of writing about that event, i instead wrote the feelings that come afterwords , the disbelief, the fear, the emptiness of knowing those people are never going to return and the fact it should have NEVER happened to them. I hope everyone enjoys :D
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FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
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MyNameIs-Nobody Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
this is great. Good job
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MarionetteVignette Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Wow... this really touched my heart because the person that I love is never coming back... She passed away about 2 weeks ago... But i thank you for writing this truly beautiful
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i sorry for your loss and i'm glad you found comfort in the poem
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CandyHeartSweetness Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
.............. I wanna cry now TT-TT.....
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice :) but in the row before the last "I miss you", fourth from the bottom, I think you mean"All I know is that you're gone" right? just thought I should let you know, it's really good poem :)
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MonsoonBloom Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
beautiful poety
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Bahar1 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I wonder, have you ever lost someone dear to you?
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
yeah thou i was a bit young. It was my great grandma, i used to sit beside her old chair everyday while we sat and watched jeopardy together. She had a heart attack one day when i was visiting and never came back. I don't remember much, just that i really liked her, and missed her after she was gone. Though i did not write this based on my personal experiences, i never do that, this is purely imagination.
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Bahar1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, I can imagine how you liked her :) I love my grandma and will really miss her if she's gone before me. And missing is maybe the most important part of a person's feelings when he/she loses someone but I find your poem a little soft. If you lost someone very dear to you, like a daughter or a son, for real, the poem you would write would probably turn out to be much stronger, feelingwise, than this one. Just wanted to say it.
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