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I Miss You by CrumbledWings I Miss You by CrumbledWings

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The awesome cover image was done by ~Erka-ruru . This piece both meant for a specific event and the anyone who's felt this way. The particular event i was thinking of was the Connecticut Shooting , and how unfair and unthinkable the events were. Instead of writing about that event, i instead wrote the feelings that come afterwords , the disbelief, the fear, the emptiness of knowing those people are never going to return and the fact it should have NEVER happened to them. I hope everyone enjoys :D
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FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
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MyNameIs-Nobody Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
this is great. Good job
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MarionetteVignette Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Wow... this really touched my heart because the person that I love is never coming back... She passed away about 2 weeks ago... But i thank you for writing this truly beautiful
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i sorry for your loss and i'm glad you found comfort in the poem
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CandyHeartSweetness Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
.............. I wanna cry now TT-TT.....
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice :) but in the row before the last "I miss you", fourth from the bottom, I think you mean"All I know is that you're gone" right? just thought I should let you know, it's really good poem :)
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MonsoonBloom Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
beautiful poety
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Bahar1 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I wonder, have you ever lost someone dear to you?
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
yeah thou i was a bit young. It was my great grandma, i used to sit beside her old chair everyday while we sat and watched jeopardy together. She had a heart attack one day when i was visiting and never came back. I don't remember much, just that i really liked her, and missed her after she was gone. Though i did not write this based on my personal experiences, i never do that, this is purely imagination.
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Bahar1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, I can imagine how you liked her :) I love my grandma and will really miss her if she's gone before me. And missing is maybe the most important part of a person's feelings when he/she loses someone but I find your poem a little soft. If you lost someone very dear to you, like a daughter or a son, for real, the poem you would write would probably turn out to be much stronger, feelingwise, than this one. Just wanted to say it.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Your probably right but i truthfully detest writing from my own feelings. I always use my imagination instead. In every poem i've written includes circumstances i had never experienced before and we i do experience them i'll stop writing about them :)P . But that's just me
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Bahar1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I do the same too :) Good way to write things.
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MusicGirl3 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful in every single way
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japanesestudent Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful
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mypuppetboresme Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
read my journal. I spilled my guts out for an hour and write something very special. Then I hit a key, and poof.. all gone.
That was the second time its happened. I will try and recreate it, but I put so much into it.... I will try

I miss you. I am not gone. And I never will be. I am waiting for your call. Eagerly awaiting. Maybe I will put it on a note to you MU
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thetoxicSpirit Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it. Although I found other meaning to it, it's still just as amazing ~ :)
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Well i'm glad you love it but umm other meaning?
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The-Funkiest-Penguin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this:D
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
I really love your poem but I have a question if you don't mind.
When you say " lover,friend,daughter,brother" did you write daughter and brother together to show that your poem about unspecific person ?
because I don't know in my mind it's either "daughter,sister" or "son,brother" or just "sibling".
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Unspecific person was what i was going for and i'm glad you like it :D
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
:nod: Your poem are really touching :floating:
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Thank you :D i hope you'll be willing to read more of my works
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RedFramed Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Instead of sharing links like the secret video of rihanna that don't belong to this part of the story you could show some respect to these peopleThey put their soul into this drawing and their feelings so at least take the art a bit more serious--This is a beautiful drawing showing really strong the emotionI like it :aww:
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DeadStickGuy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
At this time a hacker leeched a fresh fuck video clip with the slut Rihanna
Enjoy the complete thing here :
rihannas-secret-tape.eu.pn
hahahha,this girl is really stupid
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Eww don't spread crap like that in the comments of my poem
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DeadStickGuy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
[link] jooin my contest need good artoiiis t like u
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Sorry i'm not the artist, i'm the poet, the artist is ~Erka-ruru Talk to her.
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DeadStickGuy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
the can u write a poem fore one of my characters just ask bout the characters ill tell all
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Know what i'm bored, i'll do it. Just reply to this comment with as much information you can think about one of your favorite characters and by the end of the week i'll have some type of poem or prose for you
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DeadStickGuy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
hmm ok, cider the spider then. he has a spider head. he sneaks on farnhard and merges into him while he is weak. farnhhard is blind,,, so cider is now used to see.. he loves poision and poisons anyone he shares food with, he killed his entire family like this. hes sa creepy happy lil fella.. good luk, anymore u need just klet me knosw
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
SPAM
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Emilkya Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Go advertise your crap somewhere else, idiot.
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rollarius55 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work!!! Love it!
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TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
NICE
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malupi Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is so sad:(
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AngelofDarkSilence Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012   General Artist
hey i have a question how do you get your writing like this? like it has a scroll bar next to it?
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robynxsoul Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
You save it as a PDF
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AngelofDarkSilence Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012   General Artist
Aahhh i see =w= thanks ^^
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robynxsoul Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem ^-^
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AngelofDarkSilence Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012   General Artist
^^
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