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I Remember The Pain by CrumbledWings I Remember The Pain by CrumbledWings

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This entire poem was based on my favorite line from Good Will Hunting. The cover was done by *YaraKlaproos. First cover poem in a while and it may look a tad bit different because i don't have word any more, this was done on notepad (Yes notepad that stupid thing all computers have sio please forgive typos).
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FrancescaC123 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
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Patrikia-Bear Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my God.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a very powerful poem... I really liked it.
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seakee2112 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Don't we all?
Very nice
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RozenVocal Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really liked this. I may have to watch that. Very nice piece.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Oh please do i have things much better than this :D
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RozenVocal Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
All right. I'll be sure to check them out later. Tomorrow.
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
w0w :(
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tommerch Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! Brutal and keen. Good, if you're just extrapolating from someone else's life; bad (in the sense that I'm sorry you had to go through that), if it's coming from your past.

Thos. Merchant
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IAstartov Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Awesome work with the words!
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Alpheccca-Cubed Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This....
This grabs my heart and grips it so tightly.
It's beautiful.
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MitsuePheles Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... just... whoa... I don't find words for that...
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JDNight Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
Written very simplistically, yet the theme resonates so deeply. Well done! :clap:
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MaskedWannabee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is this based on your story?
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Branasaur Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I could hardly breathe while reading this. You literally took my breath away.
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AbysmalSecrets Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student General Artist
That was very touching. One thing I hate is abuse. But this was a very nicely written poem...I kinda hope this isn't a biography of anybody's...It will make me more sad if this was based from true events...
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mrhungry56 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Very powerful. It must have been hard to put that in print because it's so personal. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Nemara-Lovestring Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... ow.
My heart.
Ow.
;n;

(Good writing though <3 like wow damn.)
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AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't see the poem. Apparently my browser wants to start screwing up -_-
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
The creak of the door
Would end my sleep
I'd hoped he wouldn't come
Oh what fantasies i'd keep
I'd even hope sometimes
That he'd return normal again
With the love i used to remember
Back when i was ten
But things all changed
When mother died
Now i go beneath the covers
When he walks inside,
I used to lock the doors
But that only made it worse
He'd get angry
Shout, scream and curse
Until he'd break the door
With fury in his eyes
And he'd beat me so bad
I'd feared i would die
So instead i'd lie there
Hoping he wouldn't come
But now his feet resounded
Against the floor like drums
As he walked toward my door,
Some nights he gave me choice
He'd place a wrench and a belt
At the edge of my bed
And tell me "Choose" in a harsh voice
I'd pick the wrench
Not becuase i was brave or proud
But becuase fuck him
I wanted my screams to be loud
And as long as it happened
They would hear the sound
Of my screaming in pain
While he continued to shout
"You did this to yourselfIts for your own good"
While my voice went hoarse
And I choked on blood
I prayed to God
'Why was I his son"
Slowly dying
Until he was done.
And everyday the same words
Would rotate in my mind
"This is your fault
Your the reason why she died",
And after a while
I stopped screaming
I chose the belt instead
Before each beating
Becuase it's my punishment
My fault that he's like this now
And began to dream instead
That I might die somehow.

That's the poem :D
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Vinyl8 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks (I couldn't see it either). This is beautiful.
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AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for that. It's sad, yet beautiful in it's own way. I hope the boy will be free one day.
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DesertBlueBird Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
T~T th-that was so sad, I-I need to go curl up in the c-corner and cry
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seth243 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
were are you wine this picture was made?
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ivybae Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was so emotional... I loved it even though it was so sad. :'( This is going in my faves!
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