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I'll Find My Way To Fly by CrumbledWings I'll Find My Way To Fly by CrumbledWings

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I changed the preview image. on this one I have the author's explicit permission. I love this preview image so much so i gonna write this part really big
I DIDN'T MAKE THIS PICTURE. It was by ~DaughterofHermes a great photography if i have ever seen one
Alright so this poem is slightly happier than what i usually do but it still has my bittersweet twist to it. Its more of a song than a poem and i had some fun with its structure.
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MarionetteVignette Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
truly inspirational and so true. It was only this year that as you put it, that i finally decided to fly and do as i please and what makes me feel happy.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Well i'm glad you can fly :D
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jcole18 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
i love this poem it has so much emotion and its something i can relate to
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
:D well i'm glad you like my work, and i hope you'd watch me or at least read more of my works in the future
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jcole18 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
yw
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
yw? what does that mean
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jcole18 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
your welcome lol
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PhsycoTatie Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
simply beautiful:heart:
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Pedro-girl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Wauw. No words for this. Just... My heart collapsed.
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Bluuu18 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just beautiful.
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PaperAngel010 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful, yet sad.

story of ma life //shot
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PandaChick0508 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
NICE!!!!!!

:D :D :D :D :D
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BlackTingedKorinth Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Not only did you not link to the original drawing, you did not wait to get permission.

This piece has been reported and the original artist has been notified of your action.

You disgust me.
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desu-elimiator Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
You aren't the original artist.
It's the original artist's decision if they want to take action.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
i did not make a link to the image i made a link to its creator. and no i did not wait for confirmed permission becuase its obviously possible he may not visit his page for months and if the artist has a problem (if i didnt wait) i tell them i will take it down( the entire poem and resubmit it). and u have no right to judge anyone about anything especially within such jeuvenille and ignorant actions. (i blatantly i do not own this image and gave the amazing artist who did)
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Please-Not-Last Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
True; even so, the :devart: Copyright Policy states, "If you have used materials which are owned by other people or companies make certain that you have obtained proper permission or licensing for the use before you place your work online." Also, "It doesn't matter whether or not you've credited the proper owner, it's still considered copyrighted and you still need permission."

~BlackTingedKorinth's actions were preemptive and perhaps unnecessary, but his reasoning was not ignorant. However, it is up to you to decide whether or not to keep it up. And I will not judge you if you do keep it up until you hear from the original owner.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
blahhh way too much controversy over something so simple. alright the pictures comin down. this has been far too much and i should have just waited the extra days. my fault. i'll be sure to have explicit proof of the artist's consent next time. thank you,for showing me how thoughtless my actions could have possibly been. i'll have it done by morning within a new photo i was given permission to use.
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Please-Not-Last Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
You know you can change the preview in the "edit" area, right? Just checking. :)

Also, it wasn't thoughtless. Just a simple mistake. ;) Been through similar things myself when I took a photo off a so-called "stock photo" site and one of the original artist's friends made a stink on my page. ^^;
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
i know i can its right i'm not near a computer (this is from my ipod) and ohh that sounds bad
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Please-Not-Last Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Could have been worse. I took it down at their request and nothing happened after that.

By the way, I love the poem. Very bold and emotional. :aww:
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thank you and glad it worked out (hope this one does too)
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
you're right it's a bit happier but it still has your style, which is incredible. most defiantly one of my favorites!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
well that's awesome ;P
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
haha I know that just made your day, right? =p
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
how'd u know :)
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
just a lucky guess :aww:
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eveningstarzz Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Loved this =) it really captures the feeling of being down, but not giving up ^^
keep it up & keep it coming =D I'd love to read more ~ ^___^
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illustratio-nette Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
You don't know how many times I've felt like this myself!
So inspiring and gorgeous
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coolkidz77 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Artist
nice
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YAMATA12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautyfull :iconbravoplz:
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