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(Also first piece n a while had a bit of idea loss. Not that i couldn't write just had nothing i wanted to write about that i hadn't written before.
This is reward for all works which have these characteristics:
Impressive, Unique, Recognizable
Works which send a positive message and where we can see or where we can feel: Love, Humanity, Friendship, Compassion, Tenderness, Care, Goodness ...
You can find your art in WMW Badge Winners group folder whispermewish.deviantart.com/g… and in Apr 2014. - WMW Badge Winners journal fav.me/d7cx8wk
Your work has a chance to enter in our Gold Star Championship finale too where you can get nice prizes from us and gather more fame for yourself. Good luck.
can i have your heart ?
I love the rhythm this poem has. I get the image of a weary soul looking for a safe home. It's bitter sweet message resounds with me. I like the simplicity of it, and can't help but be reminded of the great Shel Silverstein. This too breaks down complicated subject to their basic components. Relaying deep emotional pain with sense of dark humor. That allows the reader to laugh at their own heart break.
I would have written all this in a critique, but it wasn't a hundred words. I didn't want to just ramble to make it so either.
however I really enjoyed your work and since you described it as weak, thought I might give you an honest un biased opinion.