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Rusting Metal Heart by CrumbledWings Rusting Metal Heart by CrumbledWings

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The awesome cover image was done by ~microbot23. I originally wanted a picture of metal hands to fit with the title but the only good i could find were from full metal alchemist. This poem if you haven't noticed is about a hopeful robot, continually repeating the same process as a robot must, only the process is searching for its own humanity. And every time it fails , it repeats forget past failures in a moment continuing its hope of being human. I was bored so i came up with a complex theme :D. Hope everyone enjoys :D.
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Roy02 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really beautiful :)
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extorSA Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
That tiny detailes.
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sherpaforce Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
That tiny detailes.........I have got only one question:HOW???
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
.........? what do mean how? (articulate on what exactly your asking)
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askaetherpaw Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he/she probably means how could you feel what you are writing? Like, if you were the metal heart, all of the descriptions, how do you know every detail of struggles the person faces?

Btw, I understand that feeling too... Whenever I came back home, when I was young, I had instant depression. I felt like crying, but somehow, I couldn't... I felt like my heart was heavy with pain and pity.

So sometimes I ask myself..' Would I be happier dead than suffer from the pain while being alive?'

I'm sorry if this was really long but I understand the pain most people are going through, and i salute you all for staying strong.
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michaelhardcore13 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And I salute you too!
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FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I like it! the idea is neat and you wrote it beautifully ^^
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you, i'm glad you liked it
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:iconangrboda555:
angrboda555 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
you're welcome
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Rakeru18 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
Really good. I especially love the iron fingers.
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Pantstrovich Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013   General Artist
;_; Poor robot.
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Luve2laugh Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS JUST PLAIN GORGEOUS
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Thank you , i'm glad you liked it :D
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Hex-The-Hyena Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice. As a poet myself, I would like to say that this was very moving and well thought out, and the art is a wonderful symbol for the representation of the robot's aging desire for humanity. :iconlikeasirplz:
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RafaelBulhufas Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Muito bom!
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PsyonOmega Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. Just the idea itself is amazing.
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eeramar Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
that`s a really good job, I love the concept :D
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Stripe941 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Wow amazing like the description
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fooxd Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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askaetherpaw Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your art is fascinating... i've acuuately never seen something so... scary and creative at the same time!
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tyeyso34 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is soo cool.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks brilliant!
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unde2aker Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
this reminds me of my poem "man of iron" great job
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tylerpuff Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student General Artist
That's inspiring
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:iconaskaetherpaw:
askaetherpaw Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand that feeling too... Whenever I came back home, when I was young, I had instant depression. I felt like crying, but somehow, I couldn't... I felt like my heart was heavy with pain and pity.

So sometimes I ask myself..' Would I be happier dead than suffer from the pain while being alive?'

I'm sorry if this was really long but I understand the pain most people are going through, and i salute you all for staying strong.
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XIII-C Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Beautiful poem.
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kiracrazy9999 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love it
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
i'm glad you like it ;P
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kiracrazy9999 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem :)
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very beautiful and meaningful.
Keep up the good work!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Thanks so much :D
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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