Shop More Submit  Join Login
×

Featured in Collections

Written by RandomNinjaNumber38

Writing by LordressViper

Literature by InvaderZIB13


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
February 16, 2013
File Size
20.7 KB
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
11,899 (1 today)
Favourites
1,055 (who?)
Comments
34
Downloads
138
×
Rusting Metal Heart by CrumbledWings Rusting Metal Heart by CrumbledWings

It appears you don't have PDF support in this web browser. Download PDF

The awesome cover image was done by ~microbot23. I originally wanted a picture of metal hands to fit with the title but the only good i could find were from full metal alchemist. This poem if you haven't noticed is about a hopeful robot, continually repeating the same process as a robot must, only the process is searching for its own humanity. And every time it fails , it repeats forget past failures in a moment continuing its hope of being human. I was bored so i came up with a complex theme :D. Hope everyone enjoys :D.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconroy02:
Roy02 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really beautiful :)
Reply
:iconextorsa:
extorSA Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
That tiny detailes.
Reply
:iconsherpaforce:
sherpaforce Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
That tiny detailes.........I have got only one question:HOW???
Reply
:iconcrumbledwings:
CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
.........? what do mean how? (articulate on what exactly your asking)
Reply
:iconaskaetherpaw:
askaetherpaw Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he/she probably means how could you feel what you are writing? Like, if you were the metal heart, all of the descriptions, how do you know every detail of struggles the person faces?

Btw, I understand that feeling too... Whenever I came back home, when I was young, I had instant depression. I felt like crying, but somehow, I couldn't... I felt like my heart was heavy with pain and pity.

So sometimes I ask myself..' Would I be happier dead than suffer from the pain while being alive?'

I'm sorry if this was really long but I understand the pain most people are going through, and i salute you all for staying strong.
Reply
:iconmichaelhardcore13:
michaelhardcore13 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And I salute you too!
Reply
:iconfaketearsdryfaster:
FakeTearsDryFaster Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
Reply
:iconangrboda555:
angrboda555 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I like it! the idea is neat and you wrote it beautifully ^^
Reply
:iconcrumbledwings:
CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you, i'm glad you liked it
Reply
:iconangrboda555:
angrboda555 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
you're welcome
Reply
Add a Comment: