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This isn't the type of love
that deserves poetry, 
Its love
born out of an inability
to survive alone,
Its affection
born from a necessity
to believe in a lie
I'll continue to whisper
in your ear each night.
"I'll protect you"...
A lie neither of us believe
and neither of us dispute
for fear of losing our only tether
to this decrepit existence
that we both fear so much...
this love isn't romantic
nor is it confrontational
its not comforting
nor is it disturbing,
It's merely there
sinking beside us
in the sea of life ,
that's gently drowning us,
reminding us 
that together
we can almost breathe.
I HAVE GOTTEN TIRED OF THE SAME THEMES. for real. Tired. Open thing and its the same thing as last week but by a better writer. Even my own mediocre shit. So for the rest of the month, no typical topics. I'm gonna surprise my readers.  Hope everyone enjoys.
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KallyJean96 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
It's odd that this kind of love is not the sort for typical love poetry, yet you wrote a poem about it anyways, and it turned out more beautiful than the overly sweet, sugary poems that are called classics.
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PsyAce Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Awesome. I really love this!
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Ironex-The-ultimate Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job. I liked a lot, at least it something different that the normal cheesy poems I read. It almost touched my heart... Oh, wait... I don't have one. 
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we die alone, and live together
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
Woah. This is something new. I kind of like it to be honest.
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AzureThePegasus Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*slow clap* I freaking love your work...
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hp-lover-21 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Even though I was in love at the time (and I may always love and care a little bit) this is how the last few months of my relationship went
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Cirkelsag Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures my frustration so well. Thank you! You just scored another watcher, I'd love to hear more!
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muruksus Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Thanks! finally someone putting words on this hypocricy :)
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Gosaku Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hypocrisy? Why do you say that? I received no hint of hypocritical behavior from this. It doesn't seem to be as if they expect one another or anyone to act differently, in fact, quite the contrary.
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