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This isn't the type of love
that deserves poetry, 
Its love
born out of an inability
to survive alone,
Its affection
born from a necessity
to believe in a lie
I'll continue to whisper
in your ear each night.
"I'll protect you"...
A lie neither of us believe
and neither of us dispute
for fear of losing our only tether
to this decrepit existence
that we both fear so much...
this love isn't romantic
nor is it confrontational
its not comforting
nor is it disturbing,
It's merely there
sinking beside us
in the sea of life ,
that's gently drowning us,
reminding us 
that together
we can almost breathe.
I HAVE GOTTEN TIRED OF THE SAME THEMES. for real. Tired. Open thing and its the same thing as last week but by a better writer. Even my own mediocre shit. So for the rest of the month, no typical topics. I'm gonna surprise my readers.  Hope everyone enjoys.
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KallyJean96 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
It's odd that this kind of love is not the sort for typical love poetry, yet you wrote a poem about it anyways, and it turned out more beautiful than the overly sweet, sugary poems that are called classics.
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PsyAce Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Awesome. I really love this!
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Ironex-The-ultimate Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job. I liked a lot, at least it something different that the normal cheesy poems I read. It almost touched my heart... Oh, wait... I don't have one. 
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we die alone, and live together
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
Woah. This is something new. I kind of like it to be honest.
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AzureThePegasus Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*slow clap* I freaking love your work...
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hp-lover-21 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Even though I was in love at the time (and I may always love and care a little bit) this is how the last few months of my relationship went
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Cirkelsag Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures my frustration so well. Thank you! You just scored another watcher, I'd love to hear more!
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muruksus Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Thanks! finally someone putting words on this hypocricy :)
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Gosaku Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hypocrisy? Why do you say that? I received no hint of hypocritical behavior from this. It doesn't seem to be as if they expect one another or anyone to act differently, in fact, quite the contrary.
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JinglesKitty Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like almost every piece if your but I also find it considerable that you're tired of a similar theme since your te writer and it can be difficult to spring up a new topic before yourself like daisies on the spring
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TGOM Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
I don't know if my love is this type, but it keeps me alive for more then a year now.
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Pounce21 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is far to nostalgic for me. Well written, can't say I haven't whispered similar things. 
Well done.
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ReonMerryweather Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Professional Writer
Well if it isn't the type of love that deserves poetry, then WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU GIVING IT POETRY?! HUUUUUUUUUUUUUH?!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
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ReonMerryweather Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Professional Writer
It's a legit question.
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Sauhegan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
It would be a hard and cruel world if we only received what we deserve. Grace and mercy lighten the the load. Some loves that do not deserve poetry are given a beautiful expression that not only elevates them but also brightens the rest of the world.

CrumbledWings thank you for this intimate and touching poem.
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endlessstarryskies Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
I like surprises. Just write what your heart tells you to. :) This is a very great poem! I like it. Great job! :)
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MaskedWannabee Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is very good. :)
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liveartaslifeart Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
You go! Be random in your themes!

Sometimes it's just best to let your heart and mind guide you into whatever you wanna write. Be FREEEE~~~ xD ^^
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