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I wanted wings 
To wrap me gently 
In such a wondrously beautiful embrace
Amongst the stars and angels
So I delicately ripped flight
From the butterflies surrounding my window
In the hopes they could fly me away.
I wanted to feel loved 
To feel the doting heat 
Of a lovers breath on my neck
And grasp on my heart
So I kissed the sun
And held it ever so gently
Against my breast till
It burned me away
And I could reminisce in its loving burn.
I wanted to be whole
Without flaw 
Without ugly bones to trap my soul
Without a life
So desperately wanting
Everything it could never have or be
So I embraced the seas
Submerged my entirety 
My being 
Letting its infinity 
Consume
All that would be left of me,
Till I could only 
Wash among its waves
As apart of the water.
I wanted to feel alive 
So I cut a thin line
And I grasped my own life
So I could feel every moment 
Of it slipping away.
Borrrreeeeedddddddddddddd. Inspired by PrussianPersephone , some poem she wrote had a beautiful line about butterflies wings, and that inspired my first lines from which i wrote a completely haphazard poem. To be entirely truthful , I had literally no thoughts in mind when i originally wrote this. Just wrote . No idea what it means, I'm guessing about some girl who wants things she can't have. Hope everyone enjoys XD
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
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SpadeAliceWolf321 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. My. God.
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Laureat Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Beautiful poem  :)
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DrCrazyWolf Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student
T-T soooo pretty
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful...
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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautiful..
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BlackGoddess13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
This is so beautiful.
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful peom:) How do you make the text in the middle? It adds to the poem even more, I think. 
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jmelisio Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist
This is beautifully written. Congrats, I really enjoyed it :)
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xSakuraChu Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully crafted 
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