The awesome photograph was done by ~LittleRedRidingHoody . Alright i saw a bunch of writers writing about weellll writing, and moment i saw =BleedTheDream180 do it ,i decided to join the flock. Hope mines original and i hope everyone enjoys
This is just amazing. I just.. I fave'd it before I even had read it all. It's powerful, and in some way really unique. I can't give you any response more than I love it. I don't know, maybe I'm not as good as a writer to be able to give you any critique but I'm just speechless. Amazing work, really.
This is a great text. I really like it and the feeling of.. something like "distance" that lies beneath the lines (or maybe it is the feeling that I read into them, I don't know), it's hard to describe; even in my native tongue I wouldn't really find the right word.
Yes, maybe apathy is the closest to what I mean. (A picture would describe it best though, it's like a person floating in an ocean, wondering in which direction he/she floats whereas not really sure him/herself whether he/she cares about the direction at all. .... Ok, maybe a picture doesn't work either. :'-D) I'm from Germany and though I'm good at understanding English (reading and watching english movies/series very often) I've got trouble expressing myself. Sadly.
Haha, I love this. You did a brilliant job. I don't often read writings on Deviant Art because I use it more for browsing, well... Art, but this caught my eye. And since I have a fond spot for poetry, I decided to read it. Certainly was not disappointed. Touched my heart.
This was definitely something I was able to easily relate to. It's one of those things where as I was reading it I recognized having the same feelings and ideals throughout the poem and it continues to make me realize that most artists are generally the same. Okay that sounded to bland. What I mean is, most artists, in this case writers, can feel connected through thoughts and ideals like those you conveyed in the poem. Now obviously we carry these thoughts and ideals in our own way, some are stronger than others, some are just different, but we all express it our own unique way and style. So I guess what I'm trying to say is that it's something like this that reminds me that there's a whole community of people who I can connect with because, even if they come from different backgrounds or lands or use different mediums and have their own styles, we at least have one thing in common: we're artists. Well... I hope that made sense..... -_-
Thank YOU and no problem. ^^ I read through some of your uploads and every single of them contains so many emotions! I sometimes dream of this world, I built in my mind and your texts are totally becoming a part of it. And that's why I really like them. Thanks again :3 (And yes, I'm kind of weird, sorry for that ^^")
To tell of my sadness My weakness My fears and insecurities And hoping someone understands them. Maybe I write to hide To push all those feelings away Making myself whole By giving away the things that make me …me, ~ those senstence hit me to the core of my being on why i write... ~ your an insightful and very intuitive person... ~ you see yourself and everyone else.. ~ very well done... ~ you are amazing!!!
The concept is interesting, but to be honest, I feel like this is a very flat poem. There's a lot of generic description here that's choking what you actually want to say; I think more personal, unique imagery would really liven up the work.
my original concept had alot of in depth imagery and it was three pages long, had to shave somewhere, so i decided to take away a lot the imagery in the poem and force in alot of crude emotion. sorry if it takes away from your overall enjoyment of the poem