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You Have Nice Shoelaces by CrumbledWings You Have Nice Shoelaces by CrumbledWings
The terrific photo was done by ~Camiloo. Alright this is among the cheerier poem i have written this one being, about shy love between two people. I hope everyone understands the ending, and i'm happy to announce my first 6,000 pageviews :iconattackglompplz: AWESOME RIGHT :D! Well i hope everyone enjoys.
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NerdyAssassin94 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
aww this is so cute! Love!
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, and the picture isn't showing.... :(
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW~! I really like this! :D it's so cute! X3
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww! This was so sweet! :heart:
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zuko4444 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013   Writer
Thanks I stole them from the President :D

But in all seriousness, I really loved this poem! :heart:
Good job!
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TheNanners Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks, I stole them from the president
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InklingsOfOblivion Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely beautiful :heart:
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Darjavine Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is just too cute!!!
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ehmurarld Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww that is SOO cute <33
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CharcoalShadows Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thanks, I stole them from the president.
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TheNanners Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
A lot of Tumblr peeps up in here :highfive:
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pinkyaliya Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
shoooo cute!!
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yopocris Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thoug for a minute there I'll read "Thank you, I stole them from the president" but was better than that
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mariahwendi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yay! Now I get it! This is brilliant! :heart:
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sarahspears1996 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
This is sooo cute! I was kind of upset and then I read this poem and it made me laugh. It really made me feel better. Thank you for writing such an amazing and adorable story. :hug:
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ArbiterGirl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I stole them from the president. :giggle:
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15stitches Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Very nice!

I love the image as well.

:+favlove:
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:rose:
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Azurellia Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks I stole them from the president.
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jv9ufxcy Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I stole them from the president.
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SunnyDayee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I stole them from the President
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Sarbeary55 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thank you, I stole them from the president... ;D
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hannabeth94 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I stole them from the president.
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TheBloodSlut Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
This is wonderful.

This very thing happened to me a few years back.

My my~

What a trip down memory lane reading that was.
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MisMatchedSockGirl97 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I stole them from the president.
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xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really nice ^_^
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angelenroute Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Writer
You hooked me from the start. I read a lot of crappy poems on here every single day, but this one weaves along at just the right pace. Great job and nice story. =)
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ZombieBunny999 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
This is the sweetest thing I have ever read it's so sweet my eyes are bleeding sugar.
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
haha i love that :lol:
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ZombieBunny999 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Lol thanks.
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