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Yes, roses are red
And violets are blue
But you have to understand
Who said they had to,
Its about imagination
Emotion and orignality
Not the reiteration
Of dead men's practicality
These words,
They are your sentence
To a world that has to listen
As you create the difference
Whether it be
With angst poem against love
Or how you set your heart free
To fly like a dove,
For these words
Whether or not they be true
Their beauty and ideals
Will be used to define you,
So yes,
Hope ,in fact, has feathers
And like a caged bird it sings
But these words will only be tethers
That strip you of your wings,
Those are their words
Meant for their time
And meant for their herds,
But this your time
Meant for your words
And whether they  be meaningful, stupid
Or completely absurd
I'm sure they'll be amazing.
For those of you who recognize this ,welll i now pronounce you a avid reader of deviantart. i have in fact stolen another theme. OH THE HUMANITY. Why must all the good themes be stolen by writers i admire like =BleedTheDream180 or in this case *DearPoetry (oh yeah someone should probably note her about this i wanna see if she likes my version). Well i technically didn't steal since in each seperate case they each got got the idea i used from different sources. She supposedly heard about this on tumblr and i particularly liked her take on it so i made my own. Hope everyone enjoys the ramblings of a destitute plagiarist (and before anyone gets on my case about this i'm JOKING). People never read this thing anyway. Hope everyone enjoys :D
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Writer
So inspring ♡
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Leah084 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Fantastic.
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:iconmysterydream516nstuf:
This... is beautiful.I really love this. I'll never stop writing!w00t! Thanks for everything! High-five! 
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Qwertynim Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Tht was really great! It made me think of this

Roses r red
Violets r blue
Sugar is sweet,
And so r u
But the roses r wilting,
The violets r dead,
The sugar bowl is empty,
And so is ur head!😈
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AlwaysRainCheck Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Clap superb!

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Serenesouls27 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope actually has Feathers, I agree.
Yes it can fly if we set it free,
Falling in love with this poem was meant to be! ^^
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Moonlark91 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
absolutely beautiful this made me cry. absolutely inspiring, bravo!
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap:  Well done!!!
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Blue-Moon98 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Brilliant. c:

And I'm the 1001st favouriter. :bow:
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I commend you sir :D and glad u liked the peice
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