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Hey Remember Me?

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Hey remember me?
I'm lonely
Without anyone to talk to,
Yeah we met last week
I'm so glad
You actually remembered me.

Hey remember me?
I'm happy
That we could hang out.
I know it might
Seem a bit strange to ask
But are we friends?
Yeah?!
Thank goodness
Now I can be at ease
You’re really here with me
It wasn't just a tease.

Hey remember me?
I'm weird
Just a little bit though
I thought you liked me
Because of that
Because of the way I am
Right?

Hey remember me?
I'm trying
To keep up a smile
But it’s getting pretty hard
Because every once in awhile
It seems like all you want
Is for me to cry.
Is that what a friend does?

Hey remember me?
Please say you do
I'm your friend
And all that entails
So I can take them
All your continual assails
As long as you remember me
I doubt my heart will fail.

Hey remember me?
I'm being forgotten
Though I suppose that means you don't
You never do
Never even try to
Even after all I've begged of you
Even after all we've been through
You treat me like I'm nothing
Is that all I really am to you?

Hey remember me?
No?
You never really did
And while I prayed for friendship
And fought for your love
Asked to be remembered,
You never really remembered me,
And there's no need for you to know
I'm me and I always will be
Whether or not you remember me.
This was specifically  written for remembermeforawesome :iconremembermeforawesome: . Its another one of my free request pieces. If you liked it and want me to help to express some of your thoughts just leave a comment asking or note me .

The only thing I didnt like about it was the structure i ended up using , i wanted more flow and rhyming T.T alright hope everyone enjoys XD

UPDATE: wow it reached front page reallllllyyy wasn't expecting that
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PoemsAsEscape's avatar
Trying so hard for love, nothing in return. A heartbreaking poem about being forgotten. loved it