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You Gave Me A Star

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Last night you gave me a star
A resplendent little light
You made it a surprise
Hiding it behind your thumb all night
So I wouldn't notice
The new twinkle
In our night's sky
Till finally
"Without further ado"
You whispered to me
As you showed me
Our own little island
In a sea of darkness and wonder.
"Make a wish"
you smiled bashfully
"Its your star after all"
And I wished
I wished a million times
On that tiny light
That one day
I might be able to give you
All the stars in our sky.
A little heart was put in this one since I was writing about my absolutely favorite topic (the sky. Dunno why its just so easy for me to write about). Done at two in the morning in two minutes while listening to fall out boys new album.
ALSO after this piece my account will go inactive for a minimum of two weeks.
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NicholasName's avatar
I loved this. :)
This went down deep into my soul, for real.
This speaks to me a lot, and it voices a lot of my feelings and stuff.
Also, I love writing about the sky as well.
Once I woke up like at 3 in the morning, went outside, and typed a poem...good times.  :D